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Post by Hollystar on Dec 24, 2007 0:56:37 GMT -5
Lol I kinda lost it. I will post from memory. By da way, I wrote it in 2nd grade.
Cloud If I ride you, Will you love me too? Lets fly in the sky! Wouldn't that be fine? Then we could come back down. I promise you wont leave with a frown!
Lol its kinda embarrasing.
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Post by Brightstar on Dec 26, 2007 14:45:18 GMT -5
I like it, Hollystar! You are really good at poems. ;D I made a poem, well a saying, for my family's Christmas party...even though its not that good. The snow may be deep and the temperatures low. The morale may be ecited and the tension high. The presents may be small or few. The presents may be large or many. The family may be apart, worried of the tension crackling in the air. Still be brave. Stand tall for the Christmas spirit. Celebrate such luck you may take for granted. Be merry. Love often and never forget the things dear to you. Copywrite(C)GreystripeIf you don't want the poem here, please forgive me, I'll delete it.
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Post by <<|Hawky|>> on Dec 26, 2007 15:19:05 GMT -5
IT'S SO COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Hollystar on Dec 26, 2007 17:22:47 GMT -5
thats good! of course you can post it here!
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Post by Flame on Dec 26, 2007 18:38:45 GMT -5
Ooh, we're all poets here! ;D
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Post by Brightstar on Dec 27, 2007 14:21:43 GMT -5
Thankies. I guess I'm more of a poet than I thought.
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Post by <<|Hawky|>> on Dec 27, 2007 20:06:06 GMT -5
I guess so! LOL! Just kidding! I'm actually very suckish! That is definately one of my very best ones that took me like 10000000 years to do. (actually, it was just 10 min.)
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Post by Hollystar on Jan 2, 2008 23:05:35 GMT -5
lol did it feel like that long?
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Post by Rainy on Jan 10, 2008 19:55:20 GMT -5
They aren't really horrible... I mean they aren't horrible at all! Every poem I do really does kind of stink usually
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Post by Hollystar on Jan 16, 2008 22:57:08 GMT -5
hmhm i bet not. mine are. er.. do.
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