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Post by Stormflight on Mar 21, 2008 17:49:09 GMT -5
The prophecy for this series is...
Darkness will arive and only the great Storm can wash it away...
LightningClan
Leader~Clawstar=black gray tom,light amber eyes.App=Stormpaw
Deputy~Windbrook=smoky black she-cat,ice blue eyes.App=Goldenpaw
Medicine cat~Foumleaf=glossy white she-cat,emerald eyes.App=Swiftpaw
Warriors
Dustfur=dark brown dusky tom,bright green eyes.App=Loomingpaw
Huskytooth=light blue tabby tom,gray eyes.App=Copperpaw
Butterflypelt=pretty tortoiseshell and white she-cat,soft amber eyes.App=Bloodypaw
Raindapple=white dappled gray tom,eyes like fresh rain.App=Leopardpaw
Ferntail=light tabby ginger she-cat,purple eyes.App=
Flaypelt=pale ginger tom,dark amber eyes.Unusual long claws.App=Flickerpaw
Apprentice
Stormpaw=pretty dark blue she-cat,black wavey stripes,silver paws,dark sapphire eyes
Goldenpaw=golden tom,light blue eyes
Swiftpaw=white she-cat,gray cloud like spots,light black eyes
Loomingpaw=dark gray tom,blue and black eyes
Copperpaw=brown tabby she-cat,green eyes
Bloodypaw=black she-cat.Red paws and a blood like streak back,to tail-tip.Dark red eyes
Leopardpaw=unusual spotted golden tabby she-cat,emerald eyes
Flickerpaw=small silver tabby she-cat,leaf-bare green eyes
Queens
Waterwhisker=black she-cat,white streaks across pelt,amber eyes
Flurepelt=pale gray tabby,smoky blue eyes,oldest nursery queen
Elders Claytail=huge old gray tom,wise amber eyes
Scornfullmouth=pale red tom,black tail and ruby eyes
Kits
Sootkit=black tom,amber eyes
Smokekit=silver gray tabby she-cat,blue eyes
Morningkit=light gray tabby she-cat,pale amber eyes
(Tell me what you think!)
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Post by Stormy on Mar 21, 2008 18:19:18 GMT -5
Prologue
I ran along the rocks,my heart thumping painfully,The noise behind me grew closer and closer,untill I could feel warm breath on my neck.I didnt dare look back.The only thing i'd see is my own death. I yelped in pain when a rock scraped against my ankle.I fell over and hesitantly looked behind me. It bared its white and gleaming teeth.Its fur was tawny and bristled.in a females voice it hissed,"I am Cliff,the mountain lion." I whimpered,"You talk!" Cliff growled,"Stormy,you will be on a journy." "For what,and...How do you know my name?" Cliff didnt answer,"I am afraid for you to make that journy...You must die,For you were chosen." Before I could run away,Cliff leaped at my throat and everything turned black. The last thing I heard was Cliff's mournful meow,"Forgive me little one This... Is... The... Starting... Of your adventure."
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Post by Hollystar on Mar 21, 2008 21:59:21 GMT -5
Ohh very good. The prologue is veeery attention grabbing!
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Post by Stormy on Mar 23, 2008 16:10:30 GMT -5
Thanks Holly!Its detailed but short,well i gues it doesnt really matter,just a prologue!
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Post by Stormy on Mar 23, 2008 16:24:55 GMT -5
Ill try to explain a few things here as much as possible!
Stormy,if you have noticed is the main charactor's name and also the name that i go by.Thats how i picked my origional name!
I occasionaly like to know your favorite cat so far,so keep that in mind!
Try not to chew me out on this story too much,im new at this.
I think my next chapters over the months so it could be a while befpre you get a new chap to read!
And comment freely,seriously!I want you to!Just try not to spam lol,we get pretty out of hand when that happens!
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Post by Hollystar on Mar 25, 2008 22:03:29 GMT -5
Yeah... sorry about the spam thing.
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Post by Stormy on Mar 26, 2008 15:59:37 GMT -5
But Holly nobody even spammed yet?
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Post by Hollystar on Mar 29, 2008 10:59:56 GMT -5
Well... in the future I guess!
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Post by Stormy on Mar 29, 2008 17:49:08 GMT -5
Chapter 1
*Stormpaw rushed through the long annoying grass as it tickled her nose and stuck to her pelt.There was something strange about it that she just could not place her paw on. And then she noticed as the surroundings around her began to change,But the grass did not,it clung to her pelt and seemed to keep her in place.For she could not move. She wailed in protest and yowled for help,but none came. ~What is this?~ She thought to herself. ~I cant get out!~* Something hard jabbed her in the ribs and she woke from her horrid dream. "Shutup!Noisy furball,"Snapped her denmate,Flickerpaw. Stormpaw struggled to her paws and fluffed out her fur as she shook herself.The dream had an unexpected affect on her,she could barely retort Flickerpaw when she muttered defiantly,"I'm surprised to hear you say that,Flickerfeet!" Flickerpaw only snorted and crawled out of the den as if she had seen a pathetic mouse in a warrior's den. Stormpaw could see her friend,Bloodypaw,Spit her tongue out at the tabby apprentice. She purred,"Don't mind Flickerpaw,Stormpaw.No matter what you do,she'll always be a pain in the tail!" Stormpaw watched as she prodded Goldenpaw awake.Goldenpaw stirred and mummbled, "Come back intruders!" Stormpaw flicked her ears in amusement,Goldenpaw was a waywerd young tom,but was still another one of her close friends. Bloodypaw hissed,"Wakeup already,Goldenpaw!You'll miss training if loll in the nest all day!" She softly bit into the golden tom's tail and he yelped awake Goldenpaw rose to his paws and murmered,"Sorry...I-",Bloodypaw cut him off before the ashamed tom could even explain himself. "Sorry?You have no right to be sorry-"Stormpaw wisked out of the Apprentice den before she could see the explosion Goldenpaw was about to go through.She looked across the clearing and sighed heavily,odd dreams have come to her lately and she couldn't understand why.There was one where she was being chased by a mountain lion,It ended only when she ran into a dead end. "Stormpaw,"called her mentor,Clawstar.Clawstar was leader of LightningClan.She was fortunate to have such a good teacher. "Yes?"She asked. "Your going on a patrole with me right now!"He answered urgently. Surprise rippled through her pelt and she mewed,"Is it really that important?" Clawstar curled his lip,"is it not important to you if DarkClan cats steal our prey like their doing right this instant?" Shock entered her voice as she hissed,"Of course I care,we should go immediatly!" Huskytooth-a young warrior-and Dustfur lashed their tails,"We must hurry before they get away!"yowled Huskytooth. Clawstar nodded and snarled,"Lets go teach thoes disease ridden cats to back off our prey!"Stormpaw raced away with the other cats as they rumbled through the undergrowth. Stormpaw thought with disdain~One minute i'm sleeping in a nightmare,The next i'm about to go into battle!~
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Post by Hollystar on Mar 30, 2008 19:48:43 GMT -5
Ooh can't wait to see -er read- what happens next! Battle!!!
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Post by Bloodysteps on Apr 9, 2008 17:28:18 GMT -5
STORMY loved the story it was funny ;D ;D ;D lol it was funny when Bloodypaw was lecturing Goldenpaw. Goldenpaw is like what do you know Bloodypaw."Bloodypaw" alot more than you know. "Goldenpaw"
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Post by Hollystar on Apr 15, 2008 22:19:56 GMT -5
so are we going to make another spoiler for the outcast?
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Post by Stormy on Apr 18, 2008 16:27:15 GMT -5
I hope we do soon. ;D
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Post by Hollystar on Apr 18, 2008 23:41:40 GMT -5
First it has to come out.
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Post by Stormy on Apr 21, 2008 19:29:48 GMT -5
Oh...Havent thought about dat,Oh my golly goshin!Its comin out ssssooooonnnnn!!!!Must moniter stores that sell books.Im stopin my spam instantly!....Oops,I disobeyed me own rule!...I feel like Lionpaw!
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