Post by Pansy Arwenia Took on Jan 19, 2008 1:22:54 GMT -5
Okay guys, updates appear according to how fast people R+R. Go easy on me, it's my first.
Prologue:
All around the Mountain of Everlasting Stars, medicine cats from all four Clans looked up at the moon as something slowly moved across it, their eyes flashing in alarm. Warriors and apprentices were watching too, in varying states of panic. Songstar, leader of BrookClan, called her medicine cat and deputy into her den.
"The eclipse is happening again. We've got to be cautious. You know what this terrible omen means?" she said gravely, turning to look at Streamshimmer.
The medicine cat nodded grimly. "Lightpaw and I will be on the lookout for more signs." She whisked out of the den.
Rockclaw shot a concerned glance at the BrookClan leader. "You don't honestly think that it'll happen again, do you? What happened before?"
Songstar bowed her head, then looked up at the disappearing moon. "If it does happen again, we need to prepare all of the Clans for battle."
Rockclaw pawed the ground as Songstar looked to the starry sky. "If this really does mean that BloodClan comes to us, we are in great danger. But what if it is something else?"
The stormy blue-grey she-cat looked at him, her blue eyes revealing nothing. "Only time will tell," she meowed gravely.
Some ways away, Koshnag looked at his brothers, Snake, Bones, and Blood, and leered evilly. "The eclipse! It is our time!" The four cats yowled in triumph, then raced off through the trees.
Farther still, a heavily pregnant rogue stumbled through No Cat's land, panting. She flopped down on her side, and looked up at the moon while pain wracked her body in sharp convulsions. Soon, four kits were by her side. They looked up at her, and as the moon showed it's first ray of light since it was covered, their eyes glowed blood-red.
Lethal sins in feline form,
Pride, Vanity, Vengeance, Wrath,
Who will choose light and who will choose dark,
In the battle that changes the fate of all cats?
Okay, so it's basically the plot as Warrior's Heart, but White and I really like it!
Prologue:
All around the Mountain of Everlasting Stars, medicine cats from all four Clans looked up at the moon as something slowly moved across it, their eyes flashing in alarm. Warriors and apprentices were watching too, in varying states of panic. Songstar, leader of BrookClan, called her medicine cat and deputy into her den.
"The eclipse is happening again. We've got to be cautious. You know what this terrible omen means?" she said gravely, turning to look at Streamshimmer.
The medicine cat nodded grimly. "Lightpaw and I will be on the lookout for more signs." She whisked out of the den.
Rockclaw shot a concerned glance at the BrookClan leader. "You don't honestly think that it'll happen again, do you? What happened before?"
Songstar bowed her head, then looked up at the disappearing moon. "If it does happen again, we need to prepare all of the Clans for battle."
Rockclaw pawed the ground as Songstar looked to the starry sky. "If this really does mean that BloodClan comes to us, we are in great danger. But what if it is something else?"
The stormy blue-grey she-cat looked at him, her blue eyes revealing nothing. "Only time will tell," she meowed gravely.
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Some ways away, Koshnag looked at his brothers, Snake, Bones, and Blood, and leered evilly. "The eclipse! It is our time!" The four cats yowled in triumph, then raced off through the trees.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Farther still, a heavily pregnant rogue stumbled through No Cat's land, panting. She flopped down on her side, and looked up at the moon while pain wracked her body in sharp convulsions. Soon, four kits were by her side. They looked up at her, and as the moon showed it's first ray of light since it was covered, their eyes glowed blood-red.
Lethal sins in feline form,
Pride, Vanity, Vengeance, Wrath,
Who will choose light and who will choose dark,
In the battle that changes the fate of all cats?
Okay, so it's basically the plot as Warrior's Heart, but White and I really like it!
)